03-16-2010, 03:10 PM
if i'm honest i have to say the essence of the original
is disappearing in the edits. i think the original form suited the piece much better larry. but that's just me.
the edits have imagery but it feels that the poem is no longer about you.
is disappearing in the edits. i think the original form suited the piece much better larry. but that's just me.
the edits have imagery but it feels that the poem is no longer about you.