10-10-2013, 06:01 AM
(09-27-2013, 08:19 AM)Wjames Wrote: Roar and rumble, twist and turn,This has a real buzz to it and conveys that feeling of excitement you get from watching storms. It also made me think of that drunken dance we've all done when a really good song comes on and you give yourself over to the music even if it is a bit David Brent its still good to let go. One point the last line seem off but I can't put my finger on it should it be instance or in an instant.... I'm not sure but no matter I still really enjoyed this little jive. Best TOMH
loose the lightning’s pent-up burn.
Flash and flicker, dance and dive,
for an instant feel alive.
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out

