10-09-2013, 08:59 PM
(10-09-2013, 02:43 PM)Erthona Wrote: And so I grumble up myself to face anew (six feet)Correct me if I am wrong, but Alexandrines were used by Spencer and other Elisabethan sonnet writers, if not by Shakespeare (who does use them in his blank verse. So, strictly speaking, they are not an actual violation of the sonnet form.
But then I think of how you wait for my return, (six too long)
But you are correct about this piece's length. My real purpose though was to see how well I could maintain writing iambically.
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