kiss again (an etheree)

[Jeffrey Gibson]

Sounds ok Jeffers but I think it would sound better with one more line added so it goes like this.



Kiss
again
my throat, my
ears, my eyes, my
hands, my naked thighs,
my toes, my fingertips.
my bald slap head

What do you think?

First, my name is Jeffrey, not Jeffers. Please respect that.

Second, this is 3 fewer lines, not one more.

Third, do you know what an etheree is?

Jeffrey