You've lied

[Malu]

You all have lied.
Time doesn’t turn the tide against her pressing memory. Turn the tide is a bit cliche
The passing moments fill me up with dust. Good imagery
The hours dull me with their striking hands. Clever, I enjoyed.
Do all four first lines need to end with periods?
The way she brimmed my rooms
will fade you say? Capitalize Will?
More lies.
In the whisper of the rain
Why do the following six lines all begin with lowercase?
in the stirring light of May
in the hallway,
on the stair,
she rises up,
she’s there,
abiding still.
the above three lines sound a bit contradicting, rises up only to still abide, that must have a deeper meaning, really conveyed something here, makes you think a little bit more doesn't it

I'm confused about the capitalizations and some of the grammar. I've just made a few comments/suggestions, do with them as you please. I hope it helps