10-08-2013, 03:50 PM
Chris,
Thank you. I only recently learned that all caps starting each line is taboo. I will change that.
Sole.. yes I mean the feet.. however, I enjoy the hidden cliche/double meaning of writing sole when I also mean soul. And I believe I narrowly escape the cliche with "sole". ? Eh. I kinda enjoyed picturing the reader thinking.."does she mean sole? Or soul?" Why yes I do.
"Black as crows"..cliche..yes, I have been struggling because I didn't want to lose the image of the crow..but why not just change the word "black"? Ah ha! It was so obvious - thanks for pointing out what I should have been able to see.
Thank you. I only recently learned that all caps starting each line is taboo. I will change that.
Sole.. yes I mean the feet.. however, I enjoy the hidden cliche/double meaning of writing sole when I also mean soul. And I believe I narrowly escape the cliche with "sole". ? Eh. I kinda enjoyed picturing the reader thinking.."does she mean sole? Or soul?" Why yes I do.
"Black as crows"..cliche..yes, I have been struggling because I didn't want to lose the image of the crow..but why not just change the word "black"? Ah ha! It was so obvious - thanks for pointing out what I should have been able to see.