10-7-13
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I found this very interesting, I read it as an angry producer speaking to a boy band pacing up and down frustrated at having to bite his tongue because he knows they are crap but they will make money. However I suspect your muse is being in a relationship again, I'm not sure the lack of punctuation works or why you chose to use an expletive as anger doesn't seem to fit with holding back. Hope this makes sense. Thanks for the read.TOMH

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10-7-13 - by #Caillou - 10-08-2013, 12:23 AM
RE: 10-7-13 - by Wjames - 10-08-2013, 02:00 AM
RE: 10-7-13 - by Keith - 10-08-2013, 08:42 AM



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