10-08-2013, 07:52 AM
(10-07-2013, 06:36 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:Many thanks for your kind words and suggestions I have added the to the edit as I thought they both improved the flow as per your comment. Thanks TOMH
Such a well-drawn image of mental conflict and resolution
(both elliptical and complete).
Maybe a hyphen in 'hand-grouted'?
And I think:
'I hand-grouted the tube station masterpiece."
should be said in a single line instead of breaking it
as it puts an unnatural (to me) pause in it.
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out