Writer at work [naughty word warning]

[Malu]

Her tatts are blurred by wine I enjoyed this line
She kinda smells like cat piss Which one? haha

I tap on the butcher papered typer Reads a bit awkward, I think it could use some adjusting
as the rooms bulb dances from the cord room's* also enjoyed this line
(fucking trains)

My rig is darted in the wall Not sure what you mean by rig, making ready/assembling? oil rig? a device? a person's costume? rigging of like a machine or some sort?
Won't need it anymore, finally met God

Ashtrays everywhere
All overfilled What else is around?
That babe can sure suck some butt Rather humorous haha

Gotta finish this piece You could always come back to it, more productive work happens that way sometimes
Get some sack time Plays on the cliche of hitting the sack for sleep, not terrible but I'm sure there's another way to get this point across, or just evoke it without stating it
Tomorrows fresh horror dawns early Tomorrow's*

Missed a couple punctuations, and I think you could loose a few details from some of your imagery and not a whole lot with change. The typewriter and the light bulb already implied you were in a room, so you can drop "room" from that line. That goes for the second line, we learned from the first line you are talking about a woman, you don't need to say "she kinda smells.." you could say something like a stench of cat piss fills the air or a redolence of cat piss. Hope these comments/suggestions help!