10-07-2013, 07:26 PM
Nick, one thing I do like here is using the heroin rig as a dart to stick in the wall. It's one of the cooler lines in the piece. It also makes a slight Lenny Bruce reference with the God thing in the next line. It reminds me of Bruce's comment on his heroin addiction,"I'll die young, but it's like kissing God."
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
