Sleeping rough on canvas
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Such a well-drawn image of mental conflict and resolution
(both elliptical and complete).

Maybe a hyphen in 'hand-grouted'?
And I think:
'I hand-grouted the tube station masterpiece."
should be said in a single line instead of breaking it
as it puts an unnatural (to me) pause in it.

                                                                                                                                all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?
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Sleeping rough on canvas - by Keith - 09-21-2013, 07:18 AM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by rowens - 09-21-2013, 11:49 PM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by Keith - 09-22-2013, 08:49 AM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by cidermaid - 09-22-2013, 12:57 AM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by ChristopherSea - 09-22-2013, 01:25 AM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by Milburn - 10-07-2013, 02:35 PM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by Leanne - 10-07-2013, 02:51 PM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by rayheinrich - 10-07-2013, 06:36 PM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by Keith - 10-08-2013, 07:52 AM



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