10-07-2013, 06:36 PM
Such a well-drawn image of mental conflict and resolution
(both elliptical and complete).
Maybe a hyphen in 'hand-grouted'?
And I think:
'I hand-grouted the tube station masterpiece."
should be said in a single line instead of breaking it
as it puts an unnatural (to me) pause in it.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions

