10-07-2013, 02:13 PM
Automatic writing produces some interesting results, but of course they need to be edited carefully to shape them into poems. My first suggestion is this: don't worry about rhyming until you are more familiar with structure, especially meter. It's not more poetic if it rhymes, it's just... well, rhymed. Handling that properly will come later.
You could build a poem around a few of these lines individually, especially the last, but you're going to have trouble trying to fit the whole lot of them into something cohesive. Pick a thread you want to follow. DO NOT discard any of these phrases though -- keep them for later use, because you never know when something's going to fit what you're thinking at the time.
Welcome to the site. You do have a lot to learn but it would be great to see you stick around, try new things and enjoy yourself.
You could build a poem around a few of these lines individually, especially the last, but you're going to have trouble trying to fit the whole lot of them into something cohesive. Pick a thread you want to follow. DO NOT discard any of these phrases though -- keep them for later use, because you never know when something's going to fit what you're thinking at the time.
Welcome to the site. You do have a lot to learn but it would be great to see you stick around, try new things and enjoy yourself.
It could be worse