Blue dot
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(10-03-2013, 06:38 AM)Sonata Wrote:  I wrote "I love you" across my whole body
just so you can see that I actually do.
I used a blue pen, and it seems it won't go away.

With every shower it slowly dissapears,
But there are still marks.

Today, there's just a small blue dot right bellow the belly,
And water in the shower is getting cold.
I keep coming back to this poem and the title grabbed me from the off, I like the idea behind those silly thing we do just to impress although in this case it's quite sad the last line deepens the feeling, very much enjoyed. Best TOMH

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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Blue dot - by Sonata - 10-03-2013, 06:38 AM
RE: Blue dot - by rowens - 10-03-2013, 07:47 AM
RE: Blue dot - by Malu - 10-06-2013, 02:02 PM
RE: Blue dot - by Sonata - 10-06-2013, 06:31 PM
RE: Blue dot - by Malu - 10-07-2013, 02:39 AM
RE: Blue dot - by Keith - 10-07-2013, 07:18 AM
RE: Blue dot - by jringo_ - 10-12-2013, 03:29 AM
RE: Blue dot - by RyanRader13 - 10-12-2013, 03:36 AM
RE: Blue dot - by Sonata - 10-12-2013, 08:31 AM
RE: Blue dot - by beaufort - 11-10-2013, 10:56 PM
RE: Blue dot - by rayheinrich - 11-11-2013, 05:28 AM
RE: Blue dot - by billy - 11-11-2013, 10:26 AM
RE: Blue dot - by tectak - 11-12-2013, 04:00 AM
RE: Blue dot - by killthepoet - 11-21-2013, 04:58 AM



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