< third from the left >
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You are going to have to explain this one to me. It makes no sense -- and not only because of your lack of punctuation (see below). It's disjointed and far too insular to be understood.

(10-06-2013, 07:41 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:  [font=Courier]
                this
                picture in today's news
                another informational announcement
                from our government:

                "new humane methods of execution"

                this
                picture of padded chairs
                headrests curving up
                heads
                already strapped in
                colored tubes
                sewn to their mouths
Are you saying that the heads supposedly shown here were "strapped in" by/with colored tubes that were sown to "their" (whose?) mouths? Or are you saying that heads (but not bodies?) were strapped in (where?) AND that in addition to this fact, there were also colored tubes sewn to the mouths of these heads?

In any case, what experience are you trying to get a reader to enter into with this piece?

Jeffrey
Jeffrey Gibson Photography
http://www.jgibson000.portfoliobox.me/
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Messages In This Thread
< third from the left > - by rayheinrich - 10-06-2013, 07:41 PM
RE: < second from the left > - by Jeffrey Gibson - 10-06-2013, 10:18 PM
RE: < third from the left > - by rayheinrich - 10-07-2013, 11:26 AM
RE: < third from the left > - by milo - 10-07-2013, 11:41 AM
RE: < third from the left > - by rayheinrich - 10-07-2013, 11:57 AM
RE: < third from the left > - by milo - 10-07-2013, 01:18 PM
RE: < third from the left > - by rayheinrich - 10-07-2013, 05:44 PM
RE: < second from the left > - by Apophrades - 10-06-2013, 10:30 PM



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