Blue dot
#4
Ty very much, the answer actually is right underneath ur nose. This is a quite simple poem, everything is literally written as it is, this is what happened, I tried to impress that one girl, and I wrote I love you across my whole body so she can actually see that I want her back, but the point is last stanza, even though there's just one dot left, it represents the small part of love which can't go away, while water in the shower getting cold represents me having to leave the shower - not cleaning it; completing it.
Yep, I'm awesome at making signatures too, be jealous :p
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Blue dot - by Sonata - 10-03-2013, 06:38 AM
RE: Blue dot - by rowens - 10-03-2013, 07:47 AM
RE: Blue dot - by Malu - 10-06-2013, 02:02 PM
RE: Blue dot - by Sonata - 10-06-2013, 06:31 PM
RE: Blue dot - by Malu - 10-07-2013, 02:39 AM
RE: Blue dot - by Keith - 10-07-2013, 07:18 AM
RE: Blue dot - by jringo_ - 10-12-2013, 03:29 AM
RE: Blue dot - by RyanRader13 - 10-12-2013, 03:36 AM
RE: Blue dot - by Sonata - 10-12-2013, 08:31 AM
RE: Blue dot - by beaufort - 11-10-2013, 10:56 PM
RE: Blue dot - by rayheinrich - 11-11-2013, 05:28 AM
RE: Blue dot - by billy - 11-11-2013, 10:26 AM
RE: Blue dot - by tectak - 11-12-2013, 04:00 AM
RE: Blue dot - by killthepoet - 11-21-2013, 04:58 AM



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