Ralph's Interview (Revision 2)
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For me heartbeat of the world is a very nice phrase, one of my favorites in this work. As far as changing it to "wild boar" instead of pig, don't you dare!!! Think of all the layers you would lose, referencing poor Piggy, and when hungry we are said to "pig out" etc...

I'll try to think of a different way to clarify this allusion.

cheers,
mel.
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Ralph's Interview (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-04-2013, 11:23 AM
RE: Ralph's Interview - by FractalPacifist - 10-04-2013, 04:12 PM
RE: Ralph's Interview - by Todd - 10-05-2013, 09:34 PM
RE: Ralph's Interview - by ChristopherSea - 10-05-2013, 10:12 PM
RE: Ralph's Interview - by Erthona - 10-04-2013, 05:01 PM
RE: Ralph's Interview - by tectak - 10-04-2013, 05:24 PM
RE: Ralph's Interview - by Todd - 10-05-2013, 12:00 AM
RE: Ralph's Interview - by cidermaid - 10-05-2013, 04:41 AM
RE: Ralph's Interview - by ChristopherSea - 10-05-2013, 05:21 AM
RE: Ralph's Interview - by Leanne - 10-05-2013, 05:41 AM
RE: Ralph's Interview - by bena - 10-05-2013, 07:17 AM
RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by bena - 10-05-2013, 11:25 PM
RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by Todd - 10-05-2013, 11:27 PM
RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by bena - 10-05-2013, 11:55 PM
RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by Todd - 10-06-2013, 12:02 AM
RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by Leanne - 10-06-2013, 04:44 AM
RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by bena - 10-06-2013, 05:53 AM
RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by Todd - 10-06-2013, 08:31 AM
RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by Leanne - 10-06-2013, 08:59 AM
RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-06-2013, 10:45 AM
RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision 2) - by Leanne - 10-06-2013, 11:15 AM
RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision 2) - by cidermaid - 10-06-2013, 05:49 PM
RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-07-2013, 12:28 AM



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