Ralph's Interview (Revision 2)

Ralph's Interview (Revision 2)

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10-05-2013, 05:21 AM

Todd, A separate stanza would divide the two referenecs and clue in the reader better. We dreamed of our 'parent's table' may still work and read better. I would finish with 'we ate wild boar.' Nice juxtaposition!/Chris

My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

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Ralph's Interview (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-04-2013, 11:23 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview - by FractalPacifist - 10-04-2013, 04:12 PM

RE: Ralph's Interview - by Todd - 10-05-2013, 09:34 PM

RE: Ralph's Interview - by ChristopherSea - 10-05-2013, 10:12 PM

RE: Ralph's Interview - by Erthona - 10-04-2013, 05:01 PM

RE: Ralph's Interview - by tectak - 10-04-2013, 05:24 PM

RE: Ralph's Interview - by Todd - 10-05-2013, 12:00 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview - by cidermaid - 10-05-2013, 04:41 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview - by ChristopherSea - 10-05-2013, 05:21 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview - by Leanne - 10-05-2013, 05:41 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview - by bena - 10-05-2013, 07:17 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by bena - 10-05-2013, 11:25 PM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by ChristopherSea - 10-06-2013, 12:08 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by Todd - 10-05-2013, 11:27 PM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by bena - 10-05-2013, 11:55 PM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by Todd - 10-06-2013, 12:02 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by Leanne - 10-06-2013, 04:44 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by bena - 10-06-2013, 05:53 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by ChristopherSea - 10-06-2013, 05:56 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by Todd - 10-06-2013, 08:31 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision) - by Leanne - 10-06-2013, 08:59 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-06-2013, 10:45 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision 2) - by Leanne - 10-06-2013, 11:15 AM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision 2) - by cidermaid - 10-06-2013, 05:49 PM

RE: Ralph's Interview (Revision 2) - by Todd - 10-07-2013, 12:28 AM

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