Ralph's Interview (Revision 2)

[Todd]

I appreciate all the comments, but am running off to work at the moment, so cannot address them individually till later.

One question to throw out to everyone (assuming of course that I have a reason): Do you think a strophe break after L7 "same" would enhance the poem?

I'm wondering if it would cause a layering between line 7 and 6.

Thanks again. I'll be back later to address the critiques. They are all much appreciated.

Best,

Todd