Bloodletting

[FractalPacifist]

This is beautiful! I say keep the line about atoms, it fits in surprisingly well with the rest of the natural imagery.

Got a few comments for ya ^_^

I want to collapse,
and seep between atoms
like mountain mist
shifting through valleys, before can't decide if I like the hanging word "before" here. It tripped me up in the reading.
sinking to vaporous oceans. Love the consonance of the "V"s and "S"s between this and the last line..

I want nature to scream, and
strike me with her lighting,
so that I might split
like a backyard tree.

Smear me across a thousand miles.
I want to be windswept, I'm not a fan of this comma.
and faceless.

I want nothing,
and everything.

I want disintegration.

Exhale — Love the ending.