10-03-2013, 12:58 PM
Thanks for your comments, it was my first villanelle, I pulled it to try to edit using some of the things I'm learning here. Loves are the many in a long life, and I meant to guard against what steals one's spirit and I guess that could only be what resides in one's spirit, so yes and yes. 
A list of lines is not good, I'll see if I can make anything more of it. Thanks so much.
A list of lines is not good, I'll see if I can make anything more of it. Thanks so much.
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