10-02-2013, 02:22 PM
That was one of my favorite books as a child (along with Where the Wild Things Are and the Lorax)
But I hate villanelles...not sure if it's because they sometimes make no sense, or because I could not write one to save my life. It does read well.
The only decent advice I could give you on this is that I think it is screaming for line breaks. I've seen many villanelles that do use them, so I don't think its a form rule--but totally not sure.
cheers and love,
mel.
But I hate villanelles...not sure if it's because they sometimes make no sense, or because I could not write one to save my life. It does read well.
The only decent advice I could give you on this is that I think it is screaming for line breaks. I've seen many villanelles that do use them, so I don't think its a form rule--but totally not sure.
cheers and love,
mel.