10-02-2013, 08:28 AM
This is now perfect. I declare it, even though I have no authority to do so, I shall pretend I do.....opening is fantastic and the closing much stronger. The middle never needed work, so everything is brilliant now.
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Always Winter (Revision) - by Todd - 10-01-2013, 05:26 AM
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RE: Always Winter - by Leanne - 10-01-2013, 06:54 AM
RE: Always Winter - by Todd - 10-01-2013, 07:10 AM
RE: Always Winter - by PoetryAndPhysics - 10-01-2013, 09:23 AM
RE: Always Winter - by milo - 10-01-2013, 09:53 AM
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RE: Always Winter - by bena - 10-01-2013, 03:08 PM
RE: Always Winter - by Todd - 10-01-2013, 11:34 PM
RE: Always Winter - by ChristopherSea - 10-02-2013, 12:10 AM
RE: Always Winter - by Todd - 10-02-2013, 12:13 AM
RE: Always Winter - by ChristopherSea - 10-02-2013, 12:53 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by Todd - 10-02-2013, 06:25 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by ChristopherSea - 10-02-2013, 07:02 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by bena - 10-02-2013, 08:28 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by Todd - 10-04-2013, 11:28 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by Erthona - 02-12-2014, 01:12 AM
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