Always Winter (Revision)
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(10-02-2013, 06:25 AM)Todd Wrote:  No issues Chris. Thanks for the inversion suggestion. Small changes make a big difference. Much appreciated again.

The edit is up.
It reads well Todd. The opening is smooth and perhaps more of a matter of fact as it stands in your edit. The closing seems to work this way and tie a bow on the package. Will this Ice Wench warm? Is my question...
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Always Winter (Revision) - by Todd - 10-01-2013, 05:26 AM
RE: Always Winter - by bena - 10-01-2013, 06:00 AM
RE: Always Winter - by Leanne - 10-01-2013, 06:54 AM
RE: Always Winter - by Todd - 10-01-2013, 07:10 AM
RE: Always Winter - by PoetryAndPhysics - 10-01-2013, 09:23 AM
RE: Always Winter - by milo - 10-01-2013, 09:53 AM
RE: Always Winter - by PoetryAndPhysics - 10-01-2013, 09:56 AM
RE: Always Winter - by bena - 10-01-2013, 03:08 PM
RE: Always Winter - by Todd - 10-01-2013, 11:34 PM
RE: Always Winter - by ChristopherSea - 10-02-2013, 12:10 AM
RE: Always Winter - by Todd - 10-02-2013, 12:13 AM
RE: Always Winter - by ChristopherSea - 10-02-2013, 12:53 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by Todd - 10-02-2013, 06:25 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by ChristopherSea - 10-02-2013, 07:02 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by bena - 10-02-2013, 08:28 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by Todd - 10-04-2013, 11:28 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by Erthona - 02-12-2014, 01:12 AM



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