The Undertaker's Chore

[bena]

This is nice.....BUT...if you want to make it more prose like you need to add. The date bit could be addressed another way, for a cheesy example, a newspaper blowing by with the date.

Now if you want to make it more like poetry, you'll have to get out your pruning shears and cut cut cut all the unnecessary words.

Just a thought....toss it in the bin if you wish!!!

but I do love the morbidity coupled with religion.

cheers,

bena