Cold

[tigrflye]

Edit.1
On castle stone-bricks dull and old
felt the shadows very cold.

Then they opened nearby door - what does "nearby" add to the poem? I feel it is a wasted word where a much more descriptive word could be. Something like "By opening the wrought iron door" or "dungeon door".. Your poem. I say experiement with this line.
it got colder even more.
All the warmness was winds prey,
so the shadows ran away.


Original
In light of torches by the door
at the end of corridor
on castle stone-bricks dull and old
feel the shadows very cold.

And when you open the said door
it is colder even more.
All the warmness wind will flay,
so the shadows run away.