Always Winter (Revision)
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(10-01-2013, 05:26 AM)Todd Wrote:   for Jadis

The first flakes were red--not white.
Before light, before night, there was
an everlasting tree.

Before the tree,
if you held a stone
to your ear
it would whisper
of seeds beneath soil--
the buds restless.

If you warmed the stone
between your hands,
it would pulse like the heart
of a traitor,

like a blush
on your too-white skin.

~~~
Slight edit: combined two strophes
I am going to break the rules for.a minute just to point out that you reminded me how much I loved the books. (I have committed to rereading them after reading this). The poem? Yes, of course I loved it, parts read too easy but since.when is that a crime
I will try to return.
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Always Winter (Revision) - by Todd - 10-01-2013, 05:26 AM
RE: Always Winter - by bena - 10-01-2013, 06:00 AM
RE: Always Winter - by Leanne - 10-01-2013, 06:54 AM
RE: Always Winter - by Todd - 10-01-2013, 07:10 AM
RE: Always Winter - by PoetryAndPhysics - 10-01-2013, 09:23 AM
RE: Always Winter - by milo - 10-01-2013, 09:53 AM
RE: Always Winter - by PoetryAndPhysics - 10-01-2013, 09:56 AM
RE: Always Winter - by bena - 10-01-2013, 03:08 PM
RE: Always Winter - by Todd - 10-01-2013, 11:34 PM
RE: Always Winter - by ChristopherSea - 10-02-2013, 12:10 AM
RE: Always Winter - by Todd - 10-02-2013, 12:13 AM
RE: Always Winter - by ChristopherSea - 10-02-2013, 12:53 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by Todd - 10-02-2013, 06:25 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by ChristopherSea - 10-02-2013, 07:02 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by bena - 10-02-2013, 08:28 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by Todd - 10-04-2013, 11:28 AM
RE: Always Winter (Revision) - by Erthona - 02-12-2014, 01:12 AM



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