10-01-2013, 09:53 AM
(10-01-2013, 05:26 AM)Todd Wrote: for JadisI am going to break the rules for.a minute just to point out that you reminded me how much I loved the books. (I have committed to rereading them after reading this). The poem? Yes, of course I loved it, parts read too easy but since.when is that a crime
The first flakes were red--not white.
Before light, before night, there was
an everlasting tree.
Before the tree,
if you held a stone
to your ear
it would whisper
of seeds beneath soil--
the buds restless.
If you warmed the stone
between your hands,
it would pulse like the heart
of a traitor,
like a blush
on your too-white skin.
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Slight edit: combined two strophes
I will try to return.

