10-01-2013, 08:34 AM
I love the revision and the imagery is thick...the one thing that sticks out to me is the last word "unloosed"==
I can't say why it bothers me, and perhaps it is just a me thing, leave it if you wish. For some reason unknown to me I want to see it as "unleashed"
2 cents...not worth much these days.
bena
I can't say why it bothers me, and perhaps it is just a me thing, leave it if you wish. For some reason unknown to me I want to see it as "unleashed"
2 cents...not worth much these days.
bena