Solenopsis (version 2, ChristopherSea)
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Solenopsis (version 2, ChristopherSea)
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10-01-2013, 12:50 AM
I wish I could just for once do a detailed critique on a poem on this forum, but to be honest, you guys are all so good it is difficult to do anything other than praise---so here I am once again. I LOVE the extended sexual metaphor here, it made me giggle, even though, having been attacked by these beasts, I know it is anything but funny. Still, this is an example of smart writing in my book. Loved it fully!
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Solenopsis (version 2, ChristopherSea) - by svanhoeven - 09-26-2013, 01:37 AM
RE: Solenopsis - by ChristopherSea - 09-26-2013, 12:00 PM
RE: Solenopsis - by svanhoeven - 09-26-2013, 12:50 PM
RE: Solenopsis (version 2, ChristopherSea) - by ChristopherSea - 09-26-2013, 07:15 PM
RE: Solenopsis (version 2, ChristopherSea) - by NewJerseyMan99 - 09-27-2013, 12:42 AM
RE: Solenopsis (version 2, ChristopherSea) - by svanhoeven - 09-27-2013, 01:12 AM
RE: Solenopsis (version 2, ChristopherSea) - by milo - 09-27-2013, 04:17 AM
RE: Solenopsis (version 2, ChristopherSea) - by svanhoeven - 09-27-2013, 06:02 AM
RE: Solenopsis (version 2, ChristopherSea) - by tectak - 09-27-2013, 08:18 AM
RE: Solenopsis (version 2, ChristopherSea) - by svanhoeven - 09-27-2013, 10:30 AM
RE: Solenopsis (version 2, ChristopherSea) - by tectak - 09-29-2013, 10:43 PM
RE: Solenopsis (version 2, ChristopherSea) - by bena - 10-01-2013, 12:50 AM
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