09-30-2013, 10:49 PM
As this is primarily ballad meter:
"Winter is letting go" (win-ter is) two non-accented syllables together.
better as
"Winter's letting go"
It leaves you half a foot short on the front so you could add something such as "and" to make it technically correct, however, I think it reads well without the half, as it is implied.
Dale
"Winter is letting go" (win-ter is) two non-accented syllables together.
better as
"Winter's letting go"
It leaves you half a foot short on the front so you could add something such as "and" to make it technically correct, however, I think it reads well without the half, as it is implied.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.