09-29-2013, 03:21 AM
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Hundred-ringed trunks lean,
limbs stretched north in unison,
full force tug on roots' stronghold.
We listen closely,
hoping not to hear
the roar of brutes unloosed.

original
Fear rises as winds increase.
Hundred-ringed trunks lean,
limbs stretched north in unison,
full force tug on roots' stronghold.
We listen closely,
hoping not to hear
the roar of giants unbound.
Hundred-ringed trunks lean,
limbs stretched north in unison,
full force tug on roots' stronghold.
We listen closely,
hoping not to hear
the roar of brutes unloosed.

original
Fear rises as winds increase.
Hundred-ringed trunks lean,
limbs stretched north in unison,
full force tug on roots' stronghold.
We listen closely,
hoping not to hear
the roar of giants unbound.
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