poem critique possible?
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Seems a long way to go for a punch line.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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poem critique possible? - by Intricate B - 09-28-2013, 02:37 AM
RE: poem critique possible? - by tectak - 09-28-2013, 03:59 PM
RE: poem critique possible? - by Erthona - 09-29-2013, 01:12 AM
RE: poem critique possible? - by tectak - 10-05-2013, 07:40 AM
RE: poem critique possible? - by Intricate B - 10-05-2013, 05:22 AM
RE: poem critique possible? - by ChristopherSea - 10-05-2013, 08:46 AM
RE: poem critique possible? - by Intricate B - 10-05-2013, 09:27 AM



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