09-28-2013, 02:32 PM
I agree that the first stanza is the best.
I think "this angel" is used too much. This angel, the one, the one for me... could be stronger. It's my least favorite line.
I do however adore a man that writes love poems. Thank you for sharing.
I think "this angel" is used too much. This angel, the one, the one for me... could be stronger. It's my least favorite line.
I do however adore a man that writes love poems. Thank you for sharing.