09-26-2013, 08:24 AM
Hi kboss there is a lot to enjoy in this poem the details that give the reader a sense of the location really make it stand out, I like, to hot for radio, the image of total heat exhaustion is trapped in this line. For m the poem only really gets going in stanza 3 when it seems to smooth out and the images become more real. so I guess I'm saying I would start at S3 but that is just my opinion. Best TOMH
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