09-26-2013, 02:11 AM
I liked the first 2 lines, actually I liked the first 4 lines. Seemed like a really good setup for.......something. Perhaps something 6, 8 or 10 more verses long. Keep that beginning though.
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RE: Cold - by rowens - 09-26-2013, 01:44 AM
RE: Cold - by BillyO - 09-26-2013, 02:11 AM
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RE: Cold - by Versify - 10-01-2013, 11:45 AM
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