Bloodletting

[billy]

the 1st person sounds like a troubled person. i like some of the images, and had just a couple of niggles. wish i could have been more helpful.
thanks for the read.

I want to collapse,
and seep between atoms
like mountain mist
shifting through valleys, before
sinking to vaporous oceans.

I want nature to scream, and
strike me with her lighting,
so that I might split
like a backyard tree. i like the image of the splitting tree in agony, though agony wasn't mentioned i feel it

Smear me across a thousand miles.
I want to be windswept,
and faceless. i like how windswept and faceless come from smear.

I want nothing,
and everything. not sure this couplet give you or the poem anything

I want disintegration.

Exhale — i like the end, it's like self medicating.