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Crabapple
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09-24-2013, 12:38 AM
(09-23-2013, 10:27 PM)svanhoeven Wrote: Would you consider re-writing in ballad meter? In some places the poem sounds like an incomplete ballad meter, rather than trimeter with extra syllables.You are probably right Svan, but any strict meter is beyond my reach and attention span I'm afraid. One day, I my take on that challange in the mentoring forum.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Crabapple - by ChristopherSea - 09-20-2013, 02:23 AM
RE: Crabapple - by bena - 09-20-2013, 02:59 AM
RE: Crabapple - by ChristopherSea - 09-20-2013, 03:32 AM
RE: Crabapple - by svanhoeven - 09-22-2013, 01:05 PM
RE: Crabapple - by ChristopherSea - 09-22-2013, 11:10 PM
RE: Crabapple - by ChristopherSea - 09-23-2013, 02:07 AM
RE: Crabapple - by svanhoeven - 09-23-2013, 10:27 PM
RE: Crabapple - by ChristopherSea - 09-24-2013, 12:38 AM
RE: Crabapple - by ChristopherSea - 10-04-2013, 01:10 AM
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