09-22-2013, 05:29 PM
Hi Keith,
think the edit has worked well and i am liking it even more.
So glad you did not take out the cardboard teddy bear. I came back looking for your post to ask you to think again about editing these detials as it was the small details that really made this work in the whole area / picture of grief and coping with loss to my read. (Also I remenber those teddy bear lace up things
- they had them at primary school! The ones we had were one grade better than cardboard - sort of a fiber-board; the same stuff the peg boards were made of).
Great work. AJ.
think the edit has worked well and i am liking it even more.
So glad you did not take out the cardboard teddy bear. I came back looking for your post to ask you to think again about editing these detials as it was the small details that really made this work in the whole area / picture of grief and coping with loss to my read. (Also I remenber those teddy bear lace up things
- they had them at primary school! The ones we had were one grade better than cardboard - sort of a fiber-board; the same stuff the peg boards were made of).Great work. AJ.