Tanka 26th July
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As somebody who seems to run a boarding house for perplexed moths like this one, I got a kick out of this. Good decision on making it such a short poem - so much more effective this way. Smile Also, the short lines (that you can't help but read rapidly) seem to have the same rhythm as a moth bumping into something continuously. Was that intentional, I wonder?
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Tanka 26th July - by Magpie - 07-27-2013, 01:25 AM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by soonforgotten? - 07-27-2013, 06:43 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Malu - 09-22-2013, 07:59 AM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Jim Steele - 09-22-2013, 03:59 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Erthona - 10-01-2013, 02:46 AM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Magpie - 10-01-2013, 03:11 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Malu - 10-06-2013, 02:51 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Erthona - 10-04-2013, 06:30 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by emerald13 - 10-22-2013, 04:08 PM



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