Tanka 26th July
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(07-27-2013, 01:25 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:  the labyrinth
has two exits
both illuminated -
perplexed moth
finds neither
Interesting how the labyrinth you speak of has two exits rather than one, I like how it plays into the moth not being able to find them, even though they are drawn towards light, really conveys something here. Good poem and thanks for the read Thumbsup
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Tanka 26th July - by Magpie - 07-27-2013, 01:25 AM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by soonforgotten? - 07-27-2013, 06:43 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Malu - 09-22-2013, 07:59 AM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Jim Steele - 09-22-2013, 03:59 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Erthona - 10-01-2013, 02:46 AM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Magpie - 10-01-2013, 03:11 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Malu - 10-06-2013, 02:51 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Erthona - 10-04-2013, 06:30 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by emerald13 - 10-22-2013, 04:08 PM



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