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Sleeping rough on canvas
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09-22-2013, 01:25 AM
The poem speaks to the artist in me. You have an interesting metaphor in your homeless self as a struggling and reluctant artist. I had some trouble with the first person usage in the initial stanza. Probably just the first 'I'. If it was 'they', maybe it would read better for me. I like this concept a lot Keith! Cheers, your freind in pen/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Sleeping rough on canvas - by Keith - 09-21-2013, 07:18 AM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by rowens - 09-21-2013, 11:49 PM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by Keith - 09-22-2013, 08:49 AM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by cidermaid - 09-22-2013, 12:57 AM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by ChristopherSea - 09-22-2013, 01:25 AM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by Milburn - 10-07-2013, 02:35 PM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by Leanne - 10-07-2013, 02:51 PM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by rayheinrich - 10-07-2013, 06:36 PM
RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by Keith - 10-08-2013, 07:52 AM
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