Sleeping rough on canvas

Sleeping rough on canvas

rowens
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09-21-2013, 11:49 PM

This poem seems fine. Only I wondered why you prefer critiques over saying critics in the middle stanza. I guess either way works. Unless critiques holds more significance.

Even the last part, like listing with commas, seems all right here.

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Sleeping rough on canvas - by Keith - 09-21-2013, 07:18 AM

RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by rowens - 09-21-2013, 11:49 PM

RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by Keith - 09-22-2013, 08:49 AM

RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by cidermaid - 09-22-2013, 12:57 AM

RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by ChristopherSea - 09-22-2013, 01:25 AM

RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by Milburn - 10-07-2013, 02:35 PM

RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by Leanne - 10-07-2013, 02:51 PM

RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by rayheinrich - 10-07-2013, 06:36 PM

RE: Sleeping rough on canvas - by Keith - 10-08-2013, 07:52 AM

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