09-20-2013, 10:42 AM
Hi Aish 
Damn good to see your work after so long. Hopefully it is okay I ask a quick couple of question before I give feedback.
a) Am I misreading a cheating subtext into this?
b) Is the opening line something that you have engineered to help theme the piece (camp => docking => boating => etc.) or am I getting that fucked up too?
c) is this about me?
Okay the last one isn't for real :p (I know
)
Damn good to see your work after so long. Hopefully it is okay I ask a quick couple of question before I give feedback.
a) Am I misreading a cheating subtext into this?
b) Is the opening line something that you have engineered to help theme the piece (camp => docking => boating => etc.) or am I getting that fucked up too?
c) is this about me?
Okay the last one isn't for real :p (I know
)