09-20-2013, 05:32 AM
Ella, you did a good job and I appreciate the feedback. I was indeed a little wordy and I'm going to work on paring it back.
Todd, it's good to be back. I'm doing well, thank you. You made some great points. S5 needs a little work, will get on it. What do you think of " intoxication" instead of "drug-like high"?
TOMH, it's nice to have your critique. Thanks for pointing out S4. I will scrutinize it a little harder.
Time for me to get busy.
Todd, it's good to be back. I'm doing well, thank you. You made some great points. S5 needs a little work, will get on it. What do you think of " intoxication" instead of "drug-like high"?
TOMH, it's nice to have your critique. Thanks for pointing out S4. I will scrutinize it a little harder.
Time for me to get busy.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?