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Rabbit haiku

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09-20-2013, 03:04 AM

(08-19-2013, 03:27 AM)Bunx Wrote: EDIT
sleeping in grass
a rabbit
wishful luck

Good content, got the seasonal meaning. But for me I'm just a stickler about haikus having the 17 syllables, 5-7-5 style, but that's not nearly as important as content, so good job!

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Rabbit haiku - by Bunx - 08-19-2013, 03:27 AM

RE: Rabbit haiku - by ChristopherSea - 08-19-2013, 04:09 AM

RE: Rabbit haiku - by Bunx - 08-19-2013, 10:15 AM

RE: Rabbit haiku - by btrudo - 08-23-2013, 09:09 AM

RE: Rabbit haiku - by billy - 08-23-2013, 10:32 AM

RE: Rabbit haiku - by Bunx - 08-24-2013, 01:01 AM

RE: Rabbit haiku - by Malu - 09-20-2013, 03:04 AM

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