Walking in Snow shoes.

[milo]

First, thanks for this thread and the amazing transformation of this poem.

What is a Conchalonn? It stumps google and I couldn't find it in the glossary here.

Conachlon

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@ Keith. Okay...as you can see i've moved the whole thread to serious. (Will move back to mentoring after it is done here).
My appreciation for all of the time and support that you have given this to date.

Note to Milo. No idea if moving the whole thread for workshoping is what you had in mind for how this stage might work, but seemed a sensible way to go about it , for now I've left a re-direct only on the mentoring thread. Please give me a nudge if this does not fit with your ideas.

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Current edit at top of 1st page with original post, or most recent edit can be found in post directly above .

My original intent was to post the mentored poem into serious as a new thread and leave this one here for people to study the process later but you can do as you wish.