One Night (edit #2)
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(09-18-2013, 05:27 AM)milo Wrote:  
(09-18-2013, 03:37 AM)ellajam Wrote:  
(09-18-2013, 12:57 AM)milo Wrote:  if you could find a way to break on skipped it would provide a nice double meaning expressing the joy of not having children. Thumbsup
While I understand the joy of not having children Smile, I can't figure out how a break on skipped would imply that. I'll see what happens when I shift the words around.

Again, thanks to all for discussing it with me.

hand in hand we skipped along with the joys
of never having children or their silly toys
content to have followed our intuition
no terrible twos or college tuition
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One Night (edit #2) - by ellajam - 09-17-2013, 10:09 AM
RE: One Night - by Malu - 09-17-2013, 11:45 AM
RE: One Night - by billy - 09-17-2013, 11:50 AM
RE: One Night - by ellajam - 09-17-2013, 11:59 AM
RE: One Night - by Malu - 09-18-2013, 05:39 AM
RE: One Night - by billy - 09-17-2013, 12:03 PM
RE: One Night - by ellajam - 09-17-2013, 12:14 PM
RE: One Night - by billy - 09-17-2013, 12:26 PM
RE: One Night - by ellajam - 09-17-2013, 12:37 PM
RE: One Night - by billy - 09-17-2013, 12:40 PM
RE: One Night - by ellajam - 09-17-2013, 09:30 PM
RE: One Night - by milo - 09-17-2013, 09:54 PM
RE: One Night - by ellajam - 09-17-2013, 10:15 PM
RE: One Night - by ChristopherSea - 09-17-2013, 10:32 PM
RE: One Night - by ellajam - 09-17-2013, 11:28 PM
RE: One Night - by milo - 09-18-2013, 12:26 AM
RE: One Night - by ellajam - 09-18-2013, 12:36 AM
RE: One Night - by milo - 09-18-2013, 12:57 AM
RE: One Night - by ellajam - 09-18-2013, 03:37 AM
RE: One Night - by milo - 09-18-2013, 05:27 AM
RE: One Night - by ellajam - 09-18-2013, 05:38 AM
RE: One Night (edit #1) - by ellajam - 09-19-2013, 12:37 AM
RE: One Night (edit #1) - by milo - 09-19-2013, 11:46 AM
RE: One Night (edit #1) - by ellajam - 09-19-2013, 07:25 PM
RE: One Night (edit #1) - by milo - 09-19-2013, 09:11 PM
RE: One Night (edit #1) - by ellajam - 09-19-2013, 09:19 PM
RE: One Night (edit #2) - by ellajam - 09-25-2013, 07:01 AM
RE: One Night (edit #2) - by Spikerider - 09-26-2013, 10:04 AM
RE: One Night (edit #2) - by ellajam - 09-26-2013, 10:19 AM



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