09-18-2013, 05:38 AM
(09-18-2013, 05:27 AM)milo Wrote:content to have followed our intuition(09-18-2013, 03:37 AM)ellajam Wrote:(09-18-2013, 12:57 AM)milo Wrote: if you could find a way to break on skipped it would provide a nice double meaning expressing the joy of not having children.While I understand the joy of not having children, I can't figure out how a break on skipped would imply that. I'll see what happens when I shift the words around.
Again, thanks to all for discussing it with me.
hand in hand we skipped along with the joys
of never having children or their silly toys
no terrible twos or college tuition
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, I can't figure out how a break on skipped would imply that. I'll see what happens when I shift the words around.