09-18-2013, 05:29 AM
(09-12-2013, 04:17 PM)R.C. KITCHENS Wrote: Coal-black space where time tappers off toGood story, I would suggest adding a few more details and descriptions to paint a more vivid picture in the readers mind, a picture that looks more like what you want us to see and feel.
silence. Some would say that "It is peace."
There are no more roads to travel and very
few sunsets left to see differently.
Stars sporadically fill spaces of void and those
clusters which are named become a recurrence
less thrilling.
Sleep alludes this weary body as it suffocates
in the complacency of routine.
I find myself drinking to past car crashes, slowly
drifting into them so to remember what it was like
to be living.
There is the remembrance of stealing for the first
time. The first sexual encounter, and lust.
Years pass and lust for anything begins to adjust
with age.
Life slowly equates to putting on socks in the morning.
It is just something normal and far from exciting.

