09-18-2013, 03:02 AM
In this poem the italics didn't work for me. The first 2 seem to break the phrase in the middle (maybe your point but I just don't get it), and in the third instance not even her own reflection the line seems weighty enough on its own.
just my 2 cents.
just my 2 cents.
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