09-18-2013, 02:48 AM
I have many versions of this. I'm not sure this is my favorite.
Some versions had the word sky used several times, so I used italics to emphasis the line that says she looks up. It was more comical at that point. Then I changed the italics around too. Decided to keep them, but change them. I decided I wanted those lines read with more emphasis.
Sometimes I want italics to emphasize; other times I want them to almost de-emphasize, in a kind of phasing in and out effect.
Some versions had the word sky used several times, so I used italics to emphasis the line that says she looks up. It was more comical at that point. Then I changed the italics around too. Decided to keep them, but change them. I decided I wanted those lines read with more emphasis.
Sometimes I want italics to emphasize; other times I want them to almost de-emphasize, in a kind of phasing in and out effect.