09-18-2013, 02:34 AM
ha, I liked this one, too. A bird is a turd cracked me up, I'm used to birds darting, gliding, and swooping, this was a delightful change.
But in context,
A bird is a turd
falling out of the cracked glass of God.
Our world is an eye
where angels swim
in a cataract of facts.
is more a full-blown sob than a laugh. I find it startlingly beautiful.
Can you explain your use of italics?
But in context,
A bird is a turd
falling out of the cracked glass of God.
Our world is an eye
where angels swim
in a cataract of facts.
is more a full-blown sob than a laugh. I find it startlingly beautiful.
Can you explain your use of italics?
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